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"GONE AND AWAY"

10:02 May 16 2011
Times Read: 569




Here and now

Do not touch

Do not disturb

It's just too much



Think and reflect

The time

The kiss

and it seems perfect



Gone and away

Here and now

Left in the wreckage

With the things you say



The wind pushes

The rain this week

Over my life

Over my love

And I can't speak



Here and now

Nothing and light

Gone and away

Alone in the night



Awake and numb

God knows that I pray

Here and now

Gone and away



Damn you for it all

The hell that I burn in

Damn you for all this

Damn your lips...your kiss



Help me! Im dying here!

Here and now

Gone and away

A promise that your near

The faint heartbeat in fear

Here and now I stay

Gone and going away...



Hands stuck together

I swear

I pray

He doesn't listen

I cry

I beg

Here and now

Gone and away



Be strong and stand

Learning to breathe

I watch

I wait

Here and now

Gone and away

And still you don't understand

Here and now

Gone and away

Every day I grieve



Flowers here and there

Time is running out

The shade I wear

I want to scream

I want to shout



Here and now

Gone and away

Do not resuscitate

Do not hesitate



My hands

My heart

My blood

My love

Here and now

Gone and away

My life

My tears

My silence

My horror



and then...



Asleep

Awake

The dream

I scream!



Here and now

Gone and away

Holding on

Day by day

Here and alone

You're so far away



Don't do it

Don't you dare

Hold on tight

We're almost there









COMMENTS

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TheDarkAssassin
TheDarkAssassin
10:58 May 16 2011

Awesome and evocative and deeply moving *gives her a high five and a gold star*





JustinDupree
JustinDupree
21:06 May 16 2011

Only one word to describe this. Awesome. Can't wait to read more.





Fizbop
Fizbop
22:22 May 16 2011

So you wanted a comment. Well here you go. This poem seems that you have seen better days in your past and the future is something you are looking forward to. It's showing you the path and that path is beginning to show it's light. The light is something you least expected embrace it and become one with it and you will go far.





captainglobehead
captainglobehead
00:48 May 17 2011

I want to be there.





NoctusAngelusProcella
NoctusAngelusProcella
15:50 Aug 01 2011

wow what imagery lovely





 

"THE RAPTURE"

10:16 May 04 2011
Times Read: 597




In one moment

Cheeks flushed with anticipation

A shy glance away

In this moment

With you

Inside

I beg to stay.



Your lips

My lips

Your hands

My hips

Breathing

The softest moan

In one moment.



Bare flesh

Eyes begin to flutter

In one moment

Worshiping eachother

Like this.



You close your eyes

Outloud, I cry

In this moment...

Of weakness

Touching

Trembling

Breathless

Naked

Innocently lewd.



In this moment

Coming.

Alive

With you.

COMMENTS

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ImageMaker
ImageMaker
12:56 May 04 2011

I like it





captainglobehead
captainglobehead
14:08 May 04 2011

Very, very nice.



It makes me wish...it was me.





Bellanova333
Bellanova333
23:57 May 12 2011

whew... is it hot in here? ;)





hellkid
hellkid
01:40 May 13 2011

very good. i love it.








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